Heys! Awesome story, I likes it. :D Just a thing, on both of your profiles on fanfiction and fictionpress, the link to each is wrong. :P You forgot the swiggly line. So not /thecrazycatlady but /thecrazycatlady . Just thought I'd let you know

alright. good chapter. hurry and get the next chapter up.

Woo! YAY! keep going.

Holy crap, you updated! The world must be ending! Nah, jk.

Wait, so Desert Flower's a person or an actual desert flower? o.O

Nice chapter. I liked the moment at the end. Update soon please...? Please please please?

aw that was sweet. keep going.

hey this isn't bad. keep going.

Loved the last updates. :) I'm also loving the story itself so far. :) Please update soon.

Ooh, so Yasen is aware that she's gay? Thank god. I rather read a story without all the "Oh my god, am I gay? I can't be gay!" drama and doubts and insecurities.

Update soon?

(If you don't have the next chapter planned out already, then maybe you can show us what Isra's dreaming in the first part of the next chapter?)

I really like the start of the story and can not wait to see where it goes. Please, please update soon. _

Hey, you might want to look at the second sentence. I think you mixed up the two words. You made it sound like Isra has 2 heads...

Great chapter. I like Isra. She's grateful (I think) and reflective (I can't find another word that would fit her).

Ooh, interesting. Will there be cats in this story too? Haha.

Update soon please?

(When do you think you'll update Black Jade again?)