Read all the chapters and they are phenomenally written. So much feeling trapped in these little chapters. Keep writing! I really, really love how powerful your words are :)

lovely. i love "The words won't work anymore [maybe they never did]" beautiful. and also "and i bet your all thinking "i've heard it all before." wonderful.

ooooo definitely some nice imagery going on here! :)

-Neuravinci

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