Yes, new chapter! Kat acts really cute as a cat. haha

I really love this chapter, the emotions are great.

New ally obtained i hope! Its good to have Kat back, i think Ther really needed her after the stuff he has been dealing with.

KAAAAAAAT!

Yes, new chapter! Hmm...i hope nothing bad has happened to Kat.

wow, the cookie thing was hilarious! i really like Aro and Kell, but i miss Kat.

its 3 in the morning and i really should go to bed, but i cant stop reading! im really enjoying the story, good job.

i like how his personality is starting to come out, and their banter is funny and cute.

wow, 20 years. its no wonder he is so damaged...

I really like your story so far. I think it would be kinda scary if i met someone with the power to look into my mind like that though, not being able to hide anything.

cool! a new chapter! yay!

Hello,

First of all I wanted to say that I don't usually submit reviews but this time I really wanted to encourage you to keep writing this story. I have been addicted to this story since the first chapter and I am really looking forward for each new chapter.

All the characters kind of grow on you, especially Therazin. Even if he is a drow, he has this kind of vulnerability that makes your heart twinge when you see how he reacts to situations that seems so normal to us humans, more so when those situations are linked to females.

It is really interesting to see him change and adapt bit by bit to his new environment, to see him discover his healer talent, friendship and maybe even love _

I hope that there will be soon more interaction with the other inhabitants of the refuge. I would really like to see how things will come along with the elves of the refuge and Alkorin.

It would also be great if you could give more information about how old Therazin is now and how old he was when he escaped the Underdark. I recall that in chapter 13, you wrote that he was taken to a female soldier to be broken when he was the equivalent of twelve years old. Then in chapter 5, you wrote that it lasted two drow years. Finally, to my understanding he was a slave for several decades. So I am missing some pieces. But of course, this may be explained when we will discover what happened with Alunafay.

In any case, thank you for this great story. It will be my pleasure to keep reading it.

are you going to update this anytime soon? this is a great story and i love it.

Wow I just come across this story today and I was hooked. You really do have a talent for writing XD all the character are nicely done and the dialogue is amazing, and it is very descriptive. Well penned.

Littlelampshade XD

oh man, therazin will have to fight for his place in life, won't he?

The riding scene however was pretty funny ;D