Awwwwwww this is really really cute. It's the perfect backstory to "Hey There Delilah" :D

It was...cutesie.

I love that song too! :) This was cute

I love it so much I almost cried when Tom went away - yeah, I know, I suck, but still, i think you did an amazing job, and I was singing that song the entire time I read it!

Hey, this is gorgeous. Wow, it’s just amazing.

I just can’t believe how well you fit it to the song.

I don’t know what to say, I’m speechless. Well done too, not many people can accomplish my being speechless either.

Keep writting.x

I absolutely LOVE that song...therefore I decided to love this before I read it. Lol. I really like your story, and how you tied the song in. It felt natural, though I would have like to see how their friendship was before that night a bit more. But, that's just my opinion. :D. Great job!

can do you do more one-shots about songs?i LOVED it :D

Aawh, how cute. This one-shot was good. Well done and keep the good work up :)

I was hesitant to read this because usually when people write stories based on songs they are cheesy and bland, but I'm really glad I took the time to read this. You used all the correct elements of story writing and incorporated the song in a proper manner. There's a little too much dialogue in the beginning for my taste - perhaps add some description. Overall this was a great read and I enjoyed it. Keep on writing!

This is just perfect. The way everything tied together was really awesome.

Maybe I'm that slow kid, but I didn't get who Tom was right away, and I like surprises, so it made me smile. (

I caught one typo and it was in the last line so it's like _ this story is too good for a last line typo.

But you probably want me to stop being stupid and just tell you, right? You forgot the 'e' on the word 'here'. T'is all. )

You did a really great job with the whole story.

Keep writing,

Britt•Britt