|Reviews for Alive|
| Anonymous 12/28/12 . chapter 1
This is well put together... But it's a poem and not categorized as one. Also, I think you meant 12 a.m. (beginning of the day) and not 12 p.m. (middle of the day). At least I think.
| Vonnie Jonah 7/16/11 . chapter 1
It's depressing.. and yet, very real.
What I always wanted to do.. commit suicide
Keep up the good work! (: