|Reviews for You're a beast|
| Punslinger 7/17/11 . chapter 1
This is a powerful poem, but not very subtle. You seem to be merely preaching a sermon against evil, which is all right as far as it goes. But a thoughtful poet or fiction writer should try to make the reader feel the suffering of the victims of a mass murdering monster and, more importantly, what it would feel like to be that monster. If we can learn more about our own wicked character flaws, we might be better prepared to deal with really wicked individuals when we encounter them.
| AngelDeadInnaDitch 7/17/11 . chapter 1
This is an excelent poem.
I really got a feel, y'know?
Keep up the good work