|Reviews for The time has come|
| AlysonSerenaStone 11/16/11 . chapter 2
Good job, Erin! Just one thing though, it looks like your formatting didn't take or something...
| Thewise 8/13/11 . chapter 2
Interesting. It might help to space things out a bit more. For instance, every time someone speaks enter. If you break up the paragraph a little bit it's easier on the eyes. Good story so far, keep it up!