Wow, this is outstanding. i particularly loved

"you've lit your own funeral pyre. so

go on and burn, honey."

'one of these days you won't/ escape in time,/ and you'll wind up alone. and/ with all your friendships burned to ash,/ you've lit your own funeral pyre. so/ go on and burn, honey.'

i lovelovelove this.

WOW.

This is spectacular.

Spectacular poetry.

The lack of proper grammar actually works for you in this case.

I love every single line of it.

My favorite line is

'all go up in smoke, all the same, all the same.'

Beautiful.

Keep writing.

Thank you.

Stunning.. I Love It x