|Reviews for Never Surrender|
| Nadia Ocean 8/12/11 . chapter 4
Great! I love this chapter! Your best one yet! Dakota is starting to feel something for Riley, and that so cute! Update soon!
| emilyrr 8/11/11 . chapter 4
Aw that was a cute chapter...but needs to be looonger!
| everyrose221 8/5/11 . chapter 3
i really like this plz update soon:)
| Alison R Bradley 7/31/11 . chapter 3
Just a bit of constructive criticism: try to keep an eye on your tense shifts. Present tense is really difficult to write in, and it's really easy to make mistakes; example, I've noticed past tense starts to slip in sometimes. But hey, I salute you; it's not an easy challenge to take on. Keep writing! :)
| Alison R Bradley 7/31/11 . chapter 2
Aw, I thought the teacher was actually kind of adorable :)
| Nadia Ocean 7/30/11 . chapter 3
I like that plot of this story. Some of the grammar and editing stuff could be fixed, and I felt like it was a bit choppy going from Riley's point of view to Dakota really quickly, but other than that it is a really interesting story so far.