Very, very interesting. This is an interesting case. He may have had some good in him, but he did very wrong things. I don't know if he was good or bad, but he did have a punishment coming. Great poem! Entertaining!

Loved it...it was really catchy and had greet flow and rhyme and greet job :D

Awesome! I love poems that tell a story.

Is it supposed to rhyme all the way through? It seems to lose the rhyming after the first few lines.