Can't wait for more!

This is wonderful! I love the characters and their interactions! Well done and I can't wait to read more

Mel

Sorry I haven't reviewed the past few chapters! I'm finally on fictionpress on an actual computer instead of my phone, so I can review!

AH! I am SO excited for the White House Christmas party... and the musical now! WHEN ARE THEY GOING TO KISS I JUST WANT THEM TO KISS.

I have a question though... PEOPLE PERFORM PRIDE AND PREJUDICE AS A PLAY? Dude, I need to see that..

Oh, and her dress sounds amazing. I want to go in The Closet.

Her mom is kinda crazy. Offered to buy her drugs! WUT! Haha!

Also, I really want to know what she's going to make him. GAH! I am so excited for the next chapter.

Plus you update really quickly, which is amazing!

And I was wondering if Miri was in any way based off you. Like, are you an artist?

I LOVE this story! I hope you update soon! :)

I LOVE this story! It's made me laugh and i always have a smile on my face when i read it. Can't wait for the next chapter!

Great chapter loved it:)

-Kay

This chapter made me wonder just how good Miri is at her painting. I wonder what she's gonna give Johnny!

Also, while I was reading, I found a typo right about here-"No," I said pointedly. "No, Drew invited me to the White House Christmas party last night."

This is one of my favorite stories of fictionpress, but this chapter wasn't really exciting as the rest. It seemed more like a filler. It helped add to how much Johnny likes Miri, but I can't wait until something epic happens between them again (not necessarily bad... just epic :P) Update soon!

It's so a date. :)

I love how this is progressing, and I love all your references (Veggie Tales, Brokeback Mountain). This is one of the most entertaining stories I've read!

Oh they are so cute! I love that they can talk so easily with each other. I can't wait to see Johnny's reaction to Miri when she's all dressed up for the party!

hahaha that was awesome. I never thought the ugly duckling and carrie could share a common thread but I guess so. brilliant!

Mel

Aw, this is getting super cute. Their chemistry is great... they should kiss soon... nudge nudge

EEP. So cute! I'm excited about her looking all gorgeous. I have this secret fantasy of wearing a beautiful dress and being all made up and the guy of my dreams falls head over heels for me when he sees me..pathetic much? Lol.

I added you and this story to my favorites because no matter how it ends you are a brilliant writer and this story is very well done. You have written a story that is very realistic even when the idea is maybe not so plausible. I applaud you and your hard work because you deserve to know how talented you are. Update soon, I can't get enough of this story!

Heeey so I just wanted to tell you how much I like your story! The relationship between Johnny and Miri is so cute, it just makes me smile the whole time I'm reading :) Plus I like that you've actually made Johnny's character real and dynamic, and even though he's flirtatious he can be shy or embarrassed. He's just a really likable guy. Oh, and I like Miri's whole image, like a "new age hippie" was it? Her energy and her humor are fantastic! The characters aren't perfect but they are growing and moving forward while they strengthen their ties to each other, which is something I like to read about. So yeah, I jut wanted to tell you that you're really doing a great job and I can't wait for you to update again!