|Reviews for Hero Complex|
| eagerreader 9/4/12 . chapter 18
This story was amazing. I was smiling through the whole thing. It was so perfect. I loved it!
| gaamundsen 9/1/12 . chapter 18
I really enjoyed this! Your writing style is pretty unconventional- kinda reminds me of Meg Cabot, but less feather brained. Incidentally, your character really is a hippy- vegetarian- check, unconventional clothing-check, prefers homemade things, 3tc. Anyway, loved this, would like to read more from you.
| eslover 8/23/12 . chapter 12
On the edge of my seat... cannot wait to "hear" their next conversation...
| eslover 8/23/12 . chapter 10
Oh gosh... I like how the story is developing :) and it only took me 3 chapters this time to stop and write a review!
| eslover 8/23/12 . chapter 7
Shoot, I did not know that I was not logged in! You will be seeing more reviews from me, now onto the next chapter, and I will try to review more regularly than I have so far... I promise to try at least!
| Guest 8/23/12 . chapter 7
I just have to say that I have really enjoyed this story so far, and for the last two or three chapters wanted to write a review to mention how much I love the humor and these characters! My only excuse for not reviewing sooner is I wanted to read more, it was really selfish of me and I apologize... This story is very enjoyable, and I found myself giggling like a young school girl with this interaction between Johnny and "Miri" They are so damn cute, and I hope Miriam (well I am sure she will) gets to lock lips with that sweet guy soon!
| ClosetReader 7/7/12 . chapter 18
I loved this story! I read stories on FP where the heroines are bratty and immature like all the time, so it's great to read about someone who is self sacrificing and funny! Thanks for the awesome story and I'll be moving on to the spin off! By the way, I totally knew there was something between drew and laney! This story is definitely going into my favourites! (:
| Anon 5/29/12 . chapter 4
I sincerely doubt that a nanny to the president of the united states would say no to him. like he's human, I get it, but it's the president; you just don't say no to him. also Miriam is acting really weird... I doubt you would act that casual around the first family, no matter what your personality. everything just seems so unrealistic, which sucks because I love love the concept. and the beginning was great, the whole getting hit to protect Alana thing. but the story and character development is letting it down, so I'm going to stop reading it here. but goon on you for posting and I'm positive there are people out there who lovethis story. personally, it's just not for me
| peaceout 5/22/12 . chapter 18
I freakin' LOVE your story. It was freakin' hilarious and freakin' adorable. I totally got my romantic fix satisfied.
| Ryuji Akuma 5/11/12 . chapter 1
OHMIJEZZUS! The president's daughter and I have the same name! Except mine has one more "n". - Alanna
| dream-beautiful 5/2/12 . chapter 18
This was a really sweet, easy read. It honestly made me happy, and I like the shortness and simplicity. You managed to tell a lovely story without so much petty unnecesary drama.
| brownie bunny 4/27/12 . chapter 18
This is a wonderful, wonderful story. I love the plot development, the plot twists, and especially the beautifully edited language. You capture the teen feel wonderfully in the dialogues and reactions of the characters. All the same, I feel you could develop the characters more in terms of growth. Then again, the short period during which the events happen, no doubt, pose a problem with regards to that. All in all, WONDERFUL!
| Mikariangel 4/25/12 . chapter 18
I love love love love love loveddd this sooo much 3
I loved the fact that it was realistic: she didn't get into her dream school, she isn't perfect, etc..
I love Miri's little quirks and I love Johnny's sense of chivalry :)
I especially loved Alanna and all her wonderful childishness
THANKS FOR THE STORY 3
| Binkybaby 4/24/12 . chapter 18
| ColourCascade 4/15/12 . chapter 18
I love this story :) it had me laughing so hard and it was so cute... It is now one of my most favorite stories ever. I like how you ended it, it worked well, but for some reason I had this idea that you would end with that weird idea she has about carrots and finally finds someone who feels the same way because shes famous and all the Publicity and stuff. By the way your a pretty awesome writer too, your writing really flows... You should definitely they published, and I would buy it :)