|Reviews for A Professional Affair|
| JeansKindaGirl 4/29/13 . chapter 1
I read your story over nearly two years ago when it was still being written and updated, couldn't find it for a while but now i have. Just want to tell you that this story was one of the first i read on fictionpress and i remember thinking, Wow this is really good. I love the way you've written the story and the personalities you gave Rylie and Fletcher and i guess i just want to say thanks for this great story that introduced me to the world of Fictionpress :)
| dharney-barney 11/19/12 . chapter 4
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| dharney-barney 11/19/12 . chapter 2
omg omg omg omg omg omg omg i love this story
| Megsi 11/15/11 . chapter 13
This was so charming and funny the whole way through. The dialogue was funny and witty and Fletcher and Rylie had some very convincing chemistry. The only thing I was disappointed about was that you had so much lead up to their actual relationship that I felt their interactions after their getting together were lackluster in comparison. Like the sexual tension disappeared. They were more cute together but I liked the old them, haha. Anyway, I loved it!
| Brightheart 10/22/11 . chapter 13
amazing. love this story.
| Its.Not.Me.Its.You 8/13/11 . chapter 13
I loved it.
| Sophia1234567 8/12/11 . chapter 13
WRITE THE SEQUEL!
| khrjyu 8/12/11 . chapter 13
| GnomeNut 8/12/11 . chapter 13
Loved the gay uncles! Very clever. And I died when Rainer was like, "I can't- I can't even…what is air. My life has no meaning." Seriously died laughing. In the whole context of your story, it was just brilliantly placed. Plus, I loved your character names. So... yeah. :3 As for the sequel, it sounds interesting. If you thunk you could do the story further justice I'd say go ahead. :) Fletcher shall always have a place in my heart! 3 Loved the story and great job!
| GnomeNut 8/12/11 . chapter 12
pAWWW... Can Fletcher get any more perfect? I mean, I don't think it's humanly possible to have a human in existence be even comparable to him... *swoon* Great job! /ppP.S. Live the summary for your new story! ;)/p
| GnomeNut 8/12/11 . chapter 11
Cute chapter! Although I'd be careful with the transitions and such. ;) Oh, and one of my friends told me you mentioned my in your chapter 13 AN and I would just like to say thanks AND you're very welcome. I havent seen it yet in fear that I'll read a spoiler and ruin the story, but thanks for mentioning me. :) I mean, I thought reviewing on every chapter is just something that people do. It's fun and this story definitely deserves every review it gets. :)
| iwillbemorethanthis 8/12/11 . chapter 13
The end seems rushed a bit. Now do the sequel pleaaaaaaaase(:
| theironchef96 8/11/11 . chapter 13
awwwww this chapter was sooo cute! I love fletcher! are you going to write a sequel about rainer and florence? yesterday i reccomended this story to my friend, GnomeNut, and she's absolutely in love with it now, as am I haha
you are an incredible writer and I'm going to start reading your other stories too! can't wait to read the next chapter!
| Hannah D 8/11/11 . chapter 13
I really think you should write a sequal to how rylie and fletcher raise the baby and stuff like that. i loved this story but i do think the ending is a little sudden. like we find out she's pregnant and then it's over... like don't get me wrong, the ending is great, it's a really good way to end it, but i just thought that it wouldn't be so sudden...
anyway, you should post pics of rylie and fletcher because I have my own mental image of what they look like but I wanna see your pic you know being the author and all :)
| Nephrite 8/11/11 . chapter 13
Oh my gosh, I am seriously in love with this story.
Where I live it is midnight and I have to wake up at 3:30AM because I am traveling, but I recieved a message on my phone when you updated and I had to read it. I wish it did not have to end, but I guess that happens with a lot of stories.
You have a few spelling and grammar errors, it was a bit distracting, but it was no big deal.
I want to read the rest of your stories. This was truly an amazing story that you should get published.