I didn't laugh, don't worry. Except at "you rotten priests!" but that went without saying really. Mummies give me the creeps anyway, so this was rather dramatic for me! Plus the added benefit of being set in 1929...and a man called CLAYTO. Hurumble. I really liked this story and (as a reward...I'm talking like a primary school teacher again..sorry) I'll upload a bit o'Balmoralty. :D

I LOVE EGYPT!

I had always wanted to go there...and the story is excellent!

I love it!

Though i did get confused a little bit, in the end...but can't wait for your next update!

I am glad you asked me to read it!

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I really loved the story thus far, you portrayed the setting and the people around your character Polly, beautifully. I wish to see more from you.