|Reviews for We're just beyond existence|
| Mr Madmorrow 9/4/11 . chapter 1
This one is by far my favourite of all of your works yet. Having now read all of them. I find there is something really odd and tense about the way you write, but it still flows nicely. It is like an icy shard of water is scraping down my back as I read it. Really good work, although if I did say so myself, it would not harm your poems at all to have capital letters at the beginning of lines. Although very little of your work follows any form of regular poetic structure other than the shape :P. Although I have no intentions of criticising too much, this is really a great one. Have favourited and subscribed.
Mr Madmorrow (Mikhail)
| a dreamer's suicide 7/24/11 . chapter 3
really beautiful and stunningly written x