|Reviews for Silence|
| C. S. Woolley 1/13/13 . chapter 1
Wonderful expression and syntax! Striking opening line that draws in the attention, excellent hook!
| i l n o k 6/23/12 . chapter 1
This has such a relaxed and peaceful vibe to it. . . I love it. nice concept, btw. I didn't care for the last line, it doesn't seem to fit with the rest of it. . . but that's just my opinion. ;)
| Ivy Climbroe 2/18/12 . chapter 1
This is such an amazing poem! It makes sense to me. It makes me think about how little we hear the complete serenity of silence. Very nice!
| Meadow Frost 12/15/11 . chapter 1
Ah silence, it is so beautiful to hear. Wish I had more of it well I'm typing. Anyway, amazing poem.I stumbled across it by accident and I'm glad I did.
| J112011 11/30/11 . chapter 1
Very interesting. I like the line "Yet we are never there when it is existent. / We are only there when it breaks." and the idea that an empty room is not alone but home to silence.
| Eden Green 11/21/11 . chapter 1
This is amazing. I'm really truly impressed. What a very well written piece on silence, the most beautiful nothing to hear.
| non.graceful 10/11/11 . chapter 1
I would have utilized the word like 'bandit' or 'fearless warrior' instead of 'King'. Not everybody shares the idea of Kings being... feared.. Bandits and Warriors however... are more dominant and dangerous- something that doesn't stand out in a mob or gang...
Well thats what I would have done- everyone has a different mind
| R. Ficst 10/10/11 . chapter 1
Oh beautiful. Breathtaking. Thoughtful and poignant.
| Mylilblackpen 10/9/11 . chapter 1
I found this really chilling - it was fantastic though! It was just so beautiful but just had that edge. I could just imagine a ghost or "the silence" walking around collecting memories. It's an odd comfort to think that memories aren't lost after all
| Almostafreebird 10/8/11 . chapter 1
Chilling, I can picture it, a house whose inhabitants have passed through long ago
| Dark Blue Lover 9/23/11 . chapter 1
Great job I especially like the last line.
Keep writing :-)
| InsaneGreenWriter 9/22/11 . chapter 1
Hey you said you wanted me to read some of your poems. I decided I would and no offence to you but I really thought I would hate them. It just because I am not a poemy type of person. But in my opinion this is a pretty good poem.
| kloun mannequin 9/5/11 . chapter 1
sometimes saying nothing is better than saying too much, cool piece.
| fairypen 9/1/11 . chapter 1
again..verrrrry nice one, I really liked it a lot, u really did define silence, I simply love it..please put your other poem as well, I'm gonna wait for it :)
| the ticking clock 7/24/11 . chapter 1
that was great. the last few lines were really moving. well done. :)