This is a dark poem. It reeks of a rainy day. But it was touching nonetheless, and a beautiful but sad poem. A great one.

Wow, this was fantastic, and such a saddening insight into the world of homeless people. I completely agree with this poem - there were similar ones on my English paper at the end of last year, though I think I did shit on writing an essay about them because I think I was a little too passionate and angry in agreeing with the points the poems had made... :/

This was fantastic though, good work!

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So sad I almost feel like I should give them a hug and tell them things are gonna get better but even I know it's not like that! We honestly need to help people in this situation! It was a superb poem! :D