Thanks for the review awhile back. Sorry it took so long to return the favor.

I like the piece. I think the different impossible situations you created were great. It also was really sweet and had great emotion.

One thing though, "If you ever just wanted to see me/I would read you this poem/Even if I went blind"... I didn't get how those second two lines related to the first one of them wanting to see you.

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