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| Reviews for The Adventures of Rini and Maydo! |
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  Zia 4/23/12 . chapter 1 HMMM... PRETTY GOOD! :D maybe you could change your perspective a little bit. I mean, you should proabably only have a couple of kids, I got kinds confused. But good. |
 Ram Attra 4/23/12 . chapter 1I love this story the characters the deatail the stroy line and the title of the story! man if i was a publisher this would have been on the shelfs a long time ago. and i have a litle bit of luck here since someone is so amazing can you reveiw my story and possibly give some feed back for improvement or good thing in the story :) Mate but this story has nothing wrong with and you shall cary on! update now! |
| BurningDragon5 8/20/11 . chapter 3 A crayon's POV...genius. XP BD5 |
| TexasHomeSlice 8/17/11 . chapter 3 Haha! I like the crayons... |
| TexasHomeSlice 8/6/11 . chapter 2 Aw! The munchkins are adorable! I liiiiiike it... |
| laurenexplorin 8/5/11 . chapter 1 hm...i like this story. it seems like it could be a cute series. i think you should definitelly continue. i think maydo was the cutest out of all the kids though :D hehehe yes, im playing favorites :D |
| BurningDragon5 7/31/11 . chapter 1 Funny, and you're right-it's cute! Update soon! |
| Chuly 7/31/11 . chapter 1 Thats a lot of kids. This is a great story I hope I am able to remember which one is which |
| TexasHomeSlice 7/30/11 . chapter 1 Yaydo, Maydo! This is good! Hehe. The ORININAL Rini! |
