|Reviews for The Adventures of Rini and Maydo!|
| Zia 4/23/12 . chapter 1
HMMM... PRETTY GOOD! :D maybe you could change your perspective a little bit. I mean, you should proabably only have a couple of kids, I got kinds confused. But good.
| Ram Attra 4/23/12 . chapter 1
I love this story the characters the deatail the stroy line and the title of the story!
man if i was a publisher this would have been on the shelfs a long time ago.
and i have a litle bit of luck here since someone is so amazing can you reveiw my story and possibly give some feed back for improvement or good thing in the story :)
Mate but this story has nothing wrong with and you shall cary on!
| BurningDragon5 8/20/11 . chapter 3
A crayon's POV...genius. XP
| TexasHomeSlice 8/17/11 . chapter 3
Haha! I like the crayons...
| TexasHomeSlice 8/6/11 . chapter 2
Aw! The munchkins are adorable!
I liiiiiike it...
| laurenexplorin 8/5/11 . chapter 1
hm...i like this story. it seems like it could be a cute series. i think you should definitelly continue. i think maydo was the cutest out of all the kids though :D hehehe yes, im playing favorites :D
| BurningDragon5 7/31/11 . chapter 1
Funny, and you're right-it's cute! Update soon!
| Chuly 7/31/11 . chapter 1
Thats a lot of kids. This is a great story I hope I am able to remember which one is which
| TexasHomeSlice 7/30/11 . chapter 1
This is good!
The ORININAL Rini!