|Reviews for Cassandra|
| simpleplan13 8/6/11 . chapter 1
I love that last line. The word soft is such a beautiful choice to describe memory.
The phrasing in the beginning with "Wet, still the rocks..." kinda lost me a bit. Are the rocks wet and still? Or is it Wet, still (they are) the rocks?
Anyway I liked the piece overall. And I like how you put a name to it to make it more personal.
From the Review Marathon (link in my profile).