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SashaDephono 7/31/11 . chapter 1I love your imperfections. I try to notice your perfections. I look past your wrongs. I see your rights. I ask what's wrong. And if you tell me nothings right. I'll talk to you and listen. Try to heal your wounds. I know you're perfect, But deep down I acknowledge it. You think everyone hates you, But honestly they envy you. Narwhals |
bloodandroses16 7/31/11 . chapter 1Reminds me of a few of my poems. Not because of how it written or the flow, but the message. I like it and think you did a great job, but on the last line, there is a typo. Overall, it's spectacular! :) |