|Reviews for Still|
| Time To Change 9/11/11 . chapter 1
I thought the minimal punctuation worked well in this one. Very image-provoking descriptions. Powerful last line.
| ForeverBehindTheImpression 8/11/11 . chapter 1
This one was blatant, and very powerful. You have a way with strong imagery, I really enjoy reading your work - it's raw and fresh.