|Reviews for Saving Brittany|
| Cecilia A 1/11/13 . chapter 6
Oh, those tall, attractive, smart Freshman boys... they get you every time.
Love the added complication. But he didn't text her... :(
Your writing is really good. It flows so naturally, especially the dialogue. And I don't remember who all knows she's pregnant...? Oh well. Maybe I'll go back and skim later tonight.
Still loving it.
| myheart4you 1/11/13 . chapter 6
Oh, geez. Kevin sounds effing adorable, and I think I know where this is going...
Holy crap, only a freshmen? If they are anything like what they are at my school, he'll be running the moment she says she's pregnant...
| myheart4you 1/11/13 . chapter 5
Remind me to not get pregnant, because her mother's reaction was about the same as my mom's would have been. Except my mom would have screamed longer. And been worse about it. So Helen's reaction was decent, actually. Aargh, I love this story sooo much.
| myheart4you 1/11/13 . chapter 3
That made me laugh, actually. Again with the not cliche thing. Most teen preggo stories chapters where they find out they are knocked up end with "And it said I was pregnant." So dramatic. I liked yours a lot.
Oh, and in England or wherever you live, can you drive at age of 15? You said she had her driver's license, I was just wondering
| myheart4you 1/11/13 . chapter 2
God, I love how different this is than most teen-pregnancy stories. Honestly. Most are so formulated to be exactly the same, it makes me sick. So good job.
If you like teen pregnancy stories yourself, you should check out maddiecat's "Metamorphosis". It's kind of formulated in the beginning, but it gets really emotional after a while. It sucks you in.
Anyway, nice chapter :)
| myheart4you 1/11/13 . chapter 1
Oh, the awfulness. I feel so terrible for her.
How could he get with Abby? I'm not too mad at him but he did act like he was interested in her...
Oh, good story by the way. I love how you introduced her completely in just one chapter. I'm so jealous of you, and for once, the MC seems like a normal girl. Usually these "shy" types don't wear makeup or whatever in books. Heck, I'm shy and I straighten my hair and wear makeup :)
Anyway, going to read more now
| Fanta 1/2/13 . chapter 4
Love this. It's so well written and a joy to read. It's a shame you appear to have abandoned this story, especially as it was just getting good. Anyway, just wanted to say good job and if you decide to continue with the story you have a reader right here :)
| KillaCupcakes 1/4/13 . chapter 5
Good story! I loved the mother's reaction to Brittany's pregnancy. I feel Brittany's pain, too, especially concerning Lucas. He's a douche. I think you've created interesting characters with distinct personalities. I'm curious to see what illness Brittany's father has. I'm guessing it's something mental. I also really want to see what decision Brittany makes and how the story plays out.
| Cecilia A 1/3/13 . chapter 5
YOU UPDATED! YAY!
You're a good writer and I can't help but like this story. I'm a sucker for teenage angst. :)
Update soon. :D
| Maryanne Blackwolf 5/24/12 . chapter 4
This is a great story! Please continue soon!
| Cecilia A 5/12/12 . chapter 4
Please. Please. Please.
Keep writing this. It's so good.
| Cecilia A 5/12/12 . chapter 3
It's so predictable but it's so good.
Hopefully I'm wrong about the predictable part.
| Cecilia A 5/12/12 . chapter 2
It would probably take more than that to get all the girls knocked out and drunk.
And yeah, more detail. Just to slow it down a bit. Not a whole lot, this is really quite good.
| Cecilia A 5/11/12 . chapter 1
You're a really good writer. I have very little in the way of advice to improve. Maybe more detail? I don't know, but I like this story so far.
| Guest 2/17/12 . chapter 3
That girls an idiot. If she was gonna have sex why didn't she have him wear a condom or sumthing? Is she sum kind of idiot? Hello! Don't care if she was drunk or not shouldn't have had sex.