i like it, but arnt you going to finish it? i would really like to know what happens later.

Pretty full on and actually the first time i'm read something full on like this...if that makes any sense. Aha. Great job! :D

Wow...very twisted indeed, but what's a vampire story without a good twist? I found some minor mistakes such as unnecessary capitalization and needed punctaution in certain places. But all in all it was a good read.