|Reviews for Secret|
| FilipinoChick 12/28/11 . chapter 2
Hey, quick question, although you can't answer because I'm anonymous. Ilicano or Tagalog?
Because most of my family can speak both and I get them confused. (American girl with a Filipino family...)
My spelling is crap. Love your story.
| Jensen Rose 12/12/11 . chapter 3
Like I tweeted, I'm not really good at this. So you'll have to forgive the trite crap I pass off as a review.
I like the development, splashes of local color (did I mention I can just imagine the airport bathroom scene because, I don't know, I think I've been in the same one? Haha.), and your very powerful verbs. :) I could seriously learn a thing or two from this. Nothing was redundant or divergent to the flow of the entire story, none of that kilometric description crap that just totally interrupts the moment.
Finally, since we're talking favorite lines, here's mine:
"No one was following anyone to Nikki's."
| Kim 12/11/11 . chapter 3
Sexy but intelligent at the same time. It actually had a storyline! I liked the fact that her name was never mentioned. Coincidence?
| nutsandbolts 10/7/11 . chapter 1
I knew that the bittersweet ending is gonna come and yet I still read it up to the end. I really hate it when main characters choose the secure and steady thing/life/person instead of following what their hearts/guts say, I mean you only live once, might as well embrace all the things that makes you happy, I would not want to die disappointed and unfulfilled. At times like that where you have to choose, sometimes it's good to just say "TANGINA THIS!" :))
| my poor toaster 8/30/11 . chapter 3
That is all.
| Robin Leigh 8/30/11 . chapter 1
I don't usually review the M-stuff I read (since I'm not supposed to be reading them, anyway), but seeing as you're a Pinay and you reviewed one of mine, well, I don't want to miss the chance to tell you that you're pretty cool at writing and that your use of local color (something I wish I could do more) is clever. :) I hope to see more work from you. :D
| ReadingForKicks 8/28/11 . chapter 1
I really like this story, although i was abit confused in the third part, when its mention she loves/d jeremy? I know they had heaps of chemistry but love wasnt ever mentioned in the first part! But i think she should of ended up with jeremey lol!
But other then that i liked how you sectioned off the parts with the deffinitions of words and such, it was a very good read i kinda wanted it to be longer though because i enjoyed it so much
Much love xx
| Kuso.Girl 8/28/11 . chapter 3
Fantastically written. Exactly what I was looking for. I could feel everything as if I was watching a movie instead of reading text. I enjoyed it very, very much.
| foxyricanlady 8/13/11 . chapter 2
it says the it complet but i hope not cause you ar a great writer and it feels like they still have unfinish business i hope for more soon
| Kcoarra 8/13/11 . chapter 2
Awwwww why does it have to be over :( I really enjoyed this short story you should continue it!
| Bitch Witch 8/9/11 . chapter 1
Hmmm... nice story.. is it fiction? lol! you have a future in being an erotic literature writer. I can even give you some stuffs to write about.. hahaha! Keep it up gf, and msg me when you added new ones.
| DofD 8/7/11 . chapter 1
Wow... wow! Please post the second part soon.
| preppychiq03 8/2/11 . chapter 1
Awesome. its like flaw but a whole different setting. i was lurking around your profile to see if you updated Silver tie. but i ended up reading this. ;)
| foxyricanlady 8/2/11 . chapter 1
great start. but why so short? please update soon