|Reviews for The Tale of the Immortal who Doesn't Count Sheep|
| XXOceanBlueXX 8/3/11 . chapter 1
That is simply lovely. I'd never thought immortals like that, and you did an excellent job.
| Grace McGuinness 8/3/11 . chapter 1
Loved every bit of it. Very clear and strong sense of character. Leaves you thinking: I want to know more about this guy! Why is he like this? I hope you post the full version once its finished. Brillant piece. Only thing I'd suggest is try mixing in some short sentences in those parapraphs. But like I said, brillant. It's got fire!