I really like this story so far! I hope to read more of it soon :) The way you write is great, it really fits for the time period you're writing in...though I am curious as to the title? Zeus on the Loose? I'm thinking Zeus had a reputation with woman and perhaps this new man, Sir William could have something to do with that...but then again maybe not. Who knows? I can't wait to read more of it and see where you bring these characters! Keep up the great work!

Pepper

Awwwwwwwwwwww what an awesome idea of a red head

Ok nice chappie, yes i said this to Enia toooooo, shee was devestated, muhahahahhahahahaha

What an awesome story, now I know why you and Enia are friends

there's a space in vengeful authoress! but anyways, do fancy people use the phrase 'the loo'? isn't that for country folk?

intereesting, very very interesting :P

This is really good so far! I'm excited to see what happens :)

vwait, confusion, didn't this used to be in the first chapter?

*insert clapping here* very nice. lots of big, fancy words. always a good thing. this wasn't you nanowrimo story though, was it?