I'm literally in tears...I'm speechless...This was, no, IS the most heart-wrenching story I've ever read but even though is was so sad you managed to capture every detail and topic perfectly, it made me feel like I was actually there. Spectacular job. *time to grab a box of tissues*

Absolutely amazing. I am in tears right now; you are the only Fictionpress author to ever manage that. Thank you for writing this.

It's such a good story. But it's so tragic and sad. The way you wrote it was absolutely amazing, giving it so much emotion. Your characters are well thought-out and interesting. Poor Claudia, poor Athena, poor Fallyn, poor Jessa, poor everyone. It's a heart wrenching story but unfortunately, very believable. Good job with your facts and research. I really like your writing so keep it up!

-Sparkie

You NEED to send this somewhere to be published- its amazing! Even before it was finished I swear i checked my email five times a day looking for updates- the reason im just commenting on this now is that I was on vacation and had just started chapter 19 when i had to leave- great story

I never saw this ending happing I am currently looking for the book you base this one. It's a very good and detial story it's good you didn't leave the detial as then I do not think I would be so emotial attach to the charters. Your very good I look forward to reading more off your stories.

Cazyshell

This story is fantasic I want to find the book to see where this came from I do hope you finish the story as I want to know what happen next.

Sorry about the spelling I'm dysleix

KEEP GOING! lol- the suspense is killing me!

You should definitely keep going on the story- so far, it's really good. I started at the beginning and couldn't stop reading. So great job so far :)