|Reviews for Two Paths|
| Reel Wander 8/20/12 . chapter 1
this one made me wonder which way to go, but love chooses the path I guess.
Few words, but more meaning to them. I like it. Nice. Good job!
| Laoch 8/5/11 . chapter 1
I liked this because it had so much power behind the words and I could nearly feel you choosing which way to go. Excellent flow, as it seemed to undiulate as you read it and the tone was a bit dark (which I love) and curious at the same time. Awesome.
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| shadow-of-a-trackless-sea 8/4/11 . chapter 1
I liked this poem, your ending lines caught me the most. I think it could be better though if you put a tad more imagery in it- but overall nice work.