Even though im not a FAN of a story like this I still LOVE IT! IF I try suicide i'll do this too...

Well I'm enjoying the character Katie. She has a lightheartedness about her that I find amusing. She also seems pretty flippant which can be humorous in a story like this. But the reason I'm reviewing on this chapter in particular is because I also find her to be a bit naive, as if she hasn't thought the whole thing through. By killing herself and blaming it on another person it's like she's saying she lost, as if it were a game, and the other person was a better player. To me it seems like this Chanelle girl wasn't worth losing a life over. Why didn't Katie try to run away first, or tell the authorities what was relly going on? And where are her parents in all of this? Did she forget to ask them for help or did they just not care/notice?

That's what I get from this so far.

This is interesting. Very interesting. XD

I like it so far. It's sincere and honest, and I like that Katie doesn't hold back on how she feels. Good job.

what a great story. the concept is executed a lot better here than in other renditions of this format. please keep writing.

Aw...now I want to read Chanelle's. :D

Loving it(: keep up the good work!

Emotional. Very emotional. You're good at this.

I...really...love it. It seems so...real.