All the characters have been introduced really well, which will make it all the more poignant when something bad inevitably happens, and very well written as per, hats off to you sir. Do you have to leave everything on a cliffhanger-ish note though? Next chapter please!

Oooh sinister! Got to say, terrifically written, and I love the name Sapphire Creek for some reason...even if we weren't told it had hidden history, it sounds creepy to me. Don't take too long to post the next chappie please!

Wow, that was intense and very well written...I felt like I was in a corner of the room watching as the action unfolded because the descriptions were great. I commend you, sir! Please update soon, this hater of any form of horror is grossly interested.

God this is demonically good. I am absolutely looking forward to reading more chapters very very very soon!

Can I get a dollar :P jk