Haha, I love Will and Javier's relationship, it's funny! :)

OHMIGOSH JAVI TOTALLY LIKES WILL. HE'S TOTES CRUSHING ON HIM, LIKE, SO HARD.

:DDD

THAT'S SO CUUUUUTE I SUPPORT THIS. IN CASE YOU COULDN'T TELL BY MY USE OF CAPS LOCK AND PRETEEN-GIRL-ESQUE LINGO.

Anyway. Ahem. Sorry about the caps, I'm just SO EXCITED because they'd be so cuuuuute! :DDD This better not end like the other pairing with a Will in it. Are Wills just bad luck? They'd better not be. If so, I will certainly extend my cuddle offer to Javi. If Will doesn't want him, I will be all too happy to take him off his hands :D

Fabulous as always, thanks for updating, chica! :D Please do so again soon

Latni-chan

I lik this. I wish I could describe things as well as you. I'm really enjoying your characters!

Hey, great chapter, Will makes me laugh! There's a city called Durham in the north of England, so that threw me a little until I remembered that this story was set in Canada! :)

:D You did update! I'm so proud!

Hee. Have I said how much I love WLC? Because I adore him. And his sexy Brazilian. :D

Dude, that cop is a dick. Seriously, wtf, man. Not cool. *grumpy face*

Anyway, thanks for updating, my lovely :D Please do so again soon!

Latni-chan

I love the relationship between Will and Javier, it makes me laugh! This is really good so far, looking forward to reading more! :)

WLC (Thankies, Kaitlin, for that handy name) is a bit of a dick, inne? XD A lovable and amusing dick, though.

JADYN'S GETTING MARRIED? Holy bloody shittake mushrooms, Batman. O.O That came out of nowhere.

And Ryan is a bit emotional. XD But I love him anyway.

And I'm kind of also in love with Javier. XD

...THAT's Holly? I thought she was younger. XD She sounds irritating.

Anyway, thankies for updating, chica! :D Please do so again soon!

Latni-chan

Ahaha Sneaky, you wrote this while I was away! XD

Dude, at first I just saw "William" and I was like, "WILL! :D" And then I saw that Jadyn was 36, and I was confused. Then I remembered. XD And then I was like, "Oh, yay! :D"

Anyway. New story! :D Excite! Awesome start, chica I'm loving this Will already. _

Also, I watched "Shindler's List". And I cried at the end. So much tears. I didn't really lose it until Shindler did. Then came the waterworks.

So that Matt kid is a bastard. Will should slap him with a 5-page essay, due the next day. :D

Looking forward to reading this! :D Thanks for continuing, chica Update soon, por favor!

Latni-chan

Hi! I'm new to fictiopn press and this was the first full chapter I read of anybody's story. I really enjoyed it! You have a lively word choice that makes for fun reading (it sounded like a dog being run over by a transport truck, for example). Keep up the good work!

Officially my favourite story title! I'm not sure what it is about it, but it's totally awesome. Yay for you writing a story about Katelyn and Ryan's son, guess you can't stay away from them! :) I look forward to reading more!

1. I love you for making this. The Carrs will live forever. It's pretty weird thinking that Ryate is like nine hundred years old at this point though. And Riomas is at least four hundred. Let's not even talk about Wheta. :'(

2. I love WLC. Liam is the most adorable narrator ever.

3. I love Javier, but I have an unhealthy obsession with all things Spanish/Portuguese/Russian soo. No surprise there. Javi is the cutest thing since sliced bread.

4. Sliced bread is, indeed, cute.

5. My chapter one guess about the culprit: It was the wife. :