| Reviews for Take Me Out Of The Jocks' Game |
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AMessofPickles 5/14/13 . chapter 36So lately, I've been pretty dang terrible with reviews! XD Sooo sorry about that. You just updated too quickly for me to handle haha. Anyways this was a fantastic end to the story. I thought you tied up all the loose ends really well and really expressed the changes that Charlie went through as a character. I also loved how Macon was a part of that as well :) Not to mention I'm way proud of you for getting through 36 chapters! Well done! This story was amazing and I was so thankful to be a part of it from early on! You wrote everything so beautifully and your writing just got better and better with every update. Also you managed to progress Macon and Charlie's relationship realistically and nicely. I think I enjoyed that the most. :) Good luck with all of your future writing endeavors! This was a wonderful ending to a fantastic story. :D |
foreternity 5/11/13 . chapter 36NOOOOOOOOOOOOOOO IT'S OVERRRRRRRRRRRRRRRRRRRRRRRRRRRRRRRRRRRRRRR :( BUT IT WAS SUPER FANTASTICLY AMAZINGLYYYY GOOD. :) hope you'll continue to write more and more stories; they're absolutely amazing and u should definitely continue to share your writing talent with the world ;) |
surrendertomusic 5/9/13 . chapter 37OH MY GOODNESS. I CAN'T BELIEVE IT'S OVER UGHHHH. I'm really hoping and praying you do one on Evan, because I really can't let go of these characters yet. I hope what you mentioned about him was a bit of foreshadowing! Anyways, it's been great fun reading this. Til next time, I guess :) 3 |
starlight91 5/9/13 . chapter 37AWWW :( Can't believe it's over! It has been a fun and adventurous ride with Charley :) And I'm glad she finally figured out that a photographic memory and an insanely high IQ are not bad things. It's been frustrating to see her hide it while I'm sitting here wishing I had those great qualities! Haha, but it's a good thing Macon never gave up on her. They're just right for each other :) I'll miss these characters. This story gave me a good laugh when I needed it and is definitely worth a revisit in the future! |
Guest 5/9/13 . chapter 37 Why don't u make a story about Evan? |
FairyTaleDreams 5/9/13 . chapter 37I have yet to read your first story but LOVED Charley and Macon. Wish there was some kind of epilogue though :) reaffirmation of the fact they stay together even when he leaves. Other than that - Great story! |
GreenstoneRie 5/8/13 . chapter 37Awww a dedication. Thanks :) PLEASE LET IT BE THE MUSIC ONE! |
mylittleprincess 5/8/13 . chapter 37 great story! and I love all the characters:) |
Blood-and-Bunnies 5/8/13 . chapter 37This was great. Man, i want a Macon too! :P anyways, I'm guessing the next one is about evan? am i right? :D |
BrownEyedCutie99 5/7/13 . chapter 36You are the best! Chapter 35 is definitely the best chapter. It is where Charlie solves all of her problems and embraces her true self. You did an incredible job with this story. I hope that I can one day write a book as wonderful as this one. |
The Night Crawler 5/7/13 . chapter 37I am a happy camper... But I will need more... Soon! |
TurnUpTheMusic247 5/7/13 . chapter 36I wanted to review one last time for this story :) I LOVE LOVE LOVE LOVE THIS STORY! :D I like Erin and Tyler too but I do have to agree with you Charley was more fun to read even though the other one had soccer in it and I LOVE soccer! Lol XD CAN'T WAIT TO READ MORE OF YOUR STORIES! :D Keep it up! :) |
Cammie Cassia Chase 5/7/13 . chapter 36I love it. As usual. :) |
U MadeMyLifeComplete 5/7/13 . chapter 35I loved this chapter and it made me get butterflies it was so powerful! I love your writing but I dont want this story to end! :( Can you please make a sequel, please please please please! It's an incredible story which I will surely miss if you don't. Can't wait to read more of this story and your writing soon :) Sincerely U MadeMyLifeComplete |
foreternity 5/6/13 . chapter 35.GOD. AOSJDFAJDSFLKAJSDFLKAJSLKFAJLKFDSJALKDFJLKASJDLKFA JS;LKDFJALK THAT WAS SO DAMN CUTE OMFG THAT OMFG..(: SQUEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEE! :) yaaaaaaaaay! erin and charley made up (that was a cute scene-with the crabss hehehe :D ) but macon and charley making up was the highlight of the chapter! it was perfect and you nailed it :) macon (of course ;) ) forgives charley and they all skip off into the sunsetttt! :D this chapter was amaazingg (: definitely the best chapter! :) amazing writing as usual cant wait for the epilogue! :) please pleaseeeee update sooooon! :) |