Wow... strong feelings. But I like it.

this is amazing. I can really relate

This was amazing. The repetition was powerful and every sentence after just made it almost too painful to read. Great work

Huh, interesting piece here. Why are you working on one-shots when you should be working on NaNo? Huh? Huh?

No but otherwise this was good just like your many other oneshots and I'm not even into poetry that much.

Good work now go write for NaNo!