I really like this story so far, cant wait to read more! PLease update soon!

I want the rest of the story pretty please *_* _

Why do I have a feeling that you'll end the story with "I lied about all what you read" a good fanny story, and I was shocked to be lied to, about his mom, his friend's girl,... I definitely want to read more :-)

Omg this is a great story!

Update please!

I can feel greatness out of this!

More interactment with Remos and Rhyse please !

Waiting for the next chapters!

Thanks for writing this story!

Hahah... Hahaha! Rhyse makes me laugh so much... I love his personality xD And this story so far is really interesting

Still having no clue of what exactly the people of that other world need to be saved for.

I hate getting lied to but this was entertaining, keep it up

Oh, I reallllly like where this story is going. Well written and entertaining.

Rhyse is amazing! His attitude isn't the normal 'oh shit why poor pathitic me.' I like that he deals with things as they come instead of crying over every little thing. You said that he'd killed a bird? I think that made me laugh the most. not becuase it's funny but he is actually learning to live in this new environment.

You know I was reading towards the end and it strikes me with the question... is this true..? He's a very good liar apparently so I keep expecting him to turn around saying 'gotcha!' or something. If it's not it's gonna be interesting to see what people make of it when, well IF he gets back. Hehe

You're such a good storyteller, I hope you update soon!

xx

Oh my gosh :P Rhyse seems like such a flaming queer to me. And those piercings only reiterate the truth. Or was that a lie? *sigh* Every other thing he said I assumed was a lie. Lol. So much brain stimulation!

So far this story seems to be more comedic than romantic, but it's a pleasant break from all te angst in te world.

Is it just me...? When the boy licked his lips and asked, "Are you a demon?", I was feeling some kinky sexual vibes there. Eheh... O_o

I couldn't help but scoff when the knights picked him up. I would've been quivering and shaking, not saying "Aight biktches, lets go" and cracking side saddle jokes. But hey, Rhyse is flamboyant and confident.

-JudasMonster