|Reviews for the clock struck twelve|
| TheGlycoprotein 9/24/11 . chapter 1
This poem is the kind of thing I've been needing to find for a long time. Thank you.
| playing in gasoline 8/15/11 . chapter 3
The formatting here is effective. I think I've said this in every review, but you display emotion so well.
| playing in gasoline 8/15/11 . chapter 2
Again there is the subtle element of control here. In my opinion, this is more beautiful than the first. The emotion seems more exposed here, and it is wonderful.
| playing in gasoline 8/15/11 . chapter 1
You paint a very good image of taking control.
A great beginning, for a pillowbook especially.