|Reviews for Mower Lines|
| uniquely-unique 8/13/11 . chapter 1
I loved the abrupt ending.
Maybe not abrupt exactly. . .
I like that.
It goes with the piece.
It's rather a random little poem.
More like the thoughts flitting through your mind.
And the ending for that is perfect.
Because our thoughts really have no 'set' beginning and end.
| ForeverBehindTheImpression 8/11/11 . chapter 1
I like this, especially the clean cut way you've used imagery, but the ending seems kinda unfinished to me, personally.