yay! you uploaded it xD

me likes this story, i'm sure i've told you that before .. ;)

it does make me lol, although it's not really the cause of a good thing, i mean in the story... i shouldnt laugh but i did, even though you intended that? the circumstances shouldn't be lol-able but they are..if you get me. ;D

but yes. me likes. D

xxxxmintayyyyyyyx

Haha, this story was unique, good job. You did a great job of building it up to the end. :D

Humor and horror don't often mix well, but I thought this was good. You really left me hanging for a lot of the story.. I didn't get that she was a ghost until the very end.

The style's nice too. I didn't get the fragments at first, but as I read over it I realized that it matched the suddenness of the "Scratch. Tap. Huff. Groan." etc of the rest of the story.

Thanks for sharing! Katalina

I... like it... and feel terrible about it...Correction, I LOVE it! I love the feel, the flow. It really shocked me when the girl died, but that was a very good plot twist. However, it wasn't very clear how the GHOST actually died... unless she was also possessed. A very good story. Write another, this was entertaining!