I am so glad I decided to go all the way back to he beginning of this series, rather than just start at the one you're writing now, because this is quality material. It's not often that you read a chapter that is that long on FictionPress and then want to read more! I can just tell that you're a very talented writer, and that is helped by your intelligence and thoughtfulness. I adore the way you've written her experience of the fire with that element of hindsight, you've really captured the nature of a seven year old girl without losing out on the punch. I also adore how real the interactions and reactions are, it's fantastically done :D

Oh my goodness... I loved this so much! It is, by far, my favorite story on fiction press (out of the ones I have read anyway). But anyway... You are fantastic and character developments. Sometimes I really wanted to hate

Quinn and sometimes I did... But at the end of

It, I loved her all over again. Drew... Oh my goodness... How to express someone do mouth wareringly tasty I could barely keep my thoughts in order while reading this. Haha... What I mean to say is... I think I am legitimately in love with your brilliantly created character we call Drew Anderson. I

Would marry him in like two seconds... If I didn't believe him and Quinn were meant to be of course.

Anyway! I LOVED your story and I am going to start reading

The sequel... Like now. One more thing... Have you ever read Vampire Knight? It's a manga. But I'm telling you this because your story vaguely reminds me of it. Not in a bad way, just that you might like it if you read it;)

Thank you for this story.

With Love,

Clarissa Rose

Saw the update posted of your sequel, so I thought I'd start at the beginning. Liking it so far! I'm also adding it to my community "Sultry Supernature". Check out some of the work by the other authors there, won't you?

i really liked this story...the last chapter was not what i expected. although i guess that's why you you don't read from finish to start ( which i did not do ) this story is sorta slow at the beginning than slowly rises to the climax which in some cases like this one is a good thing. anyway to get to the point this is one of the better stories i have read on here and trust me i have read quite a few on here.

To bad you put this story on Fiction Press... it could have been published and then replace every single Twilight book in the entire world, because it's so freaking good and do you know why it's so freaking good? Because it's NOTHING like stupid Twilight!

wow...what an ending! I am so glad this ending on a happy note. despite that, it left a feeling of epicness and I got shivers...it also left the feeling that this wasn't the end, but also that you had wrapped up Quinn's story for now. amazing, amazing job with this one. this rewritten version was tighter, more emotional, more descriptive, just the right length, and still full of the best lines, hilerious moments and the beautiful characters that I've come to love. great job. you're writing has really improved...I'm telling you, this story has the pontential to go places! keep writing like this, and I hope to see you're stories on the shelves in book stores someday :) seriously.

are you going to countinue into Autmun Moon? I would love to see where the next step takes you. Keep it up!

Yay! It's over! Kill Quinn already. No I'm not insulting your writing, just the irritating characters. Big complaint: you still haven't explained what 'Decemeber Sun' is. As in wtf does it mean? Yay, there's sun in Decemeber, what on earth does that have to do with the story?

love the banter between these guys. its so fun to read and really strenghens their characters :) keep it up!

Sup Darling?

Nuances:

"The strange, mysterious, mind fucking, violent and generally antagonistic new vampire. Lucy." Quin shouldn't know this about her yet. This is in here is bothering me.

"I don't get you anymore Quinn. I don't get any of this. I thought it was just me at first but now…" Confusion Drew thought it was just him what?

great chapter...Drew was awesome, the interaction between Sophia and Quinn was handled brillinatly. overall, amazing job. your description was spot on...although I think you could have seperated the paragraphs a little bit more, but thats really it. can't wait for more!

This is Nia, being confused. What is she 'sposed to tell Drew, and am I supposed to know it? No errors, but again, Nia is sleep deprived. Loveyoulove Oh, Read my new fic. Please.

lol, love Quin being immature! 3

OHMYGOD.

IM CRYING. THIS IS AMAZING.

YOU ARE INSPIRATION.

Umm, her friends seem like bitches. It seems like they're going out of their way to MAKE her depressed.

LOVED this chapter. Q was so funny, and I love the part with Rachel. the ending was an nice bit of family tension. well done :) can't wait for more!