|Reviews for December Sun|
| the ticking clock 9/24/11 . chapter 18
i really only have one thing to say...AMAZING.
this chapter has everything-i got choked up with tears, I was smiling at the cuteness, and I was laughing my head off. wow. awesome.
| the ticking clock 9/21/11 . chapter 17
that's my only coherent thought at the moment. AMAZING! I love how you wrote out this scene, I watched it playing out right in front of me...so descriptive and just beautifully done. pure awesomness, espically the end. I like how you're balancing all the dailogue and description and thoughts...really well done there, there was just enough of everything if that makes any sense. Can't wait for more!
PS, this is seriously you're best writing EVER. no joke, this is awesome!
| the ticking clock 9/16/11 . chapter 16
wow...that's really all I have to say. this was AMAZING. very well done...dark, funny, tense..just pure awesomness. I really love how you're writing this draft. the descriptions are wonderful, but what i really love is the dailogue. so funny and realsitc. good stuff. can't wait for more!
| the ticking clock 9/12/11 . chapter 15
whoa...intese, Jana. Wow. Liking this draft A LOT. :D
| the ticking clock 9/10/11 . chapter 14
beautiful. Such an awesome chapter...I've always loved the conversations between these guys, and this part made me smile and feel like crying at the same time. incredable chapter...with a great cliffhanger/foreshadowing moment...awesome. can't wait.
PS oh, and did we ever find out who was carving the pentagrams on their wrists? i know this isn't in December Sun, but I just thought of it now...
| the ticking clock 9/5/11 . chapter 13
i LOVE these two! I love how you show their friendship so clearly and how much they care for each other while trying to beat each other up. its amazingly realistic and so fun to read1 ANd the Edward Cullen thing cracked me up! soo funny! :)
can't wait for the next chapter!
| PaNdA.aTtAcK 9/5/11 . chapter 1
I like it so far
| the ticking clock 9/4/11 . chapter 12
that was GREAT. pure awesomness. the interaction betweewn drew and quinn had me cracking up. and the descriptions and thoughts that Q was having when she was dying in the cementary were incredable. i actaully laughed a little at some parts and then was holding my breath in others. good stuff.
and the Shakespear thing? haha you just love teasing me don't you :D that was hilerious! I will always remeber that it was Crosgrove now, i promise.
i love the way Drew and Quinn talk and argue. its so sweet and really shows the depth of their friendship. LOVED this quote:
"How can i trust you anymore Drew?"
"YOu can't. that's what makes life exciting."
seriuosly, this draft is incredbale. its full of so much emotion and insight and depth to both the charecters and the story. December SUn is going places, my friend!
keep it up!
| the ticking clock 9/1/11 . chapter 11
YES! i've been waiting for this chapter, and you handled it amazingly! I loved the new descriptions of the "behind the gym" scene, how Quinn's emotions are all over the place, how Drew was trembling and acting weird, it was just so fun and thrilling to read. awesome stuff. I honestly have no compliants :)
| the ticking clock 8/30/11 . chapter 10
wow...so emotional...although the thing with the fast food did make me smile. i feel really bad for drew. heck, i feel really bad for all of them! I am so connected to your amazing charecters...you've created such a beliavble world that you can't help but fall in love with the story.
can't wait for more!
| the ticking clock 8/27/11 . chapter 9
that was amazing! Your writing has improved sooo much! It is so clear and descriptive and wonderfully conversational! this is awesome. Loved, the LOTR and Hobbit refrences! :) and Rose's death scene was so powerful and dramatic, I loved how Drew smelled her blood...at least I think that's why he ran off, am I right? Poor Sophia...
can't wait for more! this is awesome!
| SonofLeroy too lazy to sign in 8/27/11 . chapter 4
I actually started tearing up around this chapter, though I hate to admit it. And as for severe depression, you went about describing it nicely. I'll probably feel a lot less crazy when I'm going through that. Anyway, I've run into some grammatical errors here and there, but other than that, you are very descriptive and are amazing at writing.
| the ticking clock 8/25/11 . chapter 8
amazing chapter! :D can't wait for more
| thetickinclocl 8/23/11 . chapter 7
I can't think straight right now. I am in awe of the awesomness...
this was absuloulty amazing! Pure genius. Their conversations and your desription of everything in this chapter was so clear and real and I could picture it perfectly. Your writing has really improved. This is amazing stuff right here.
keep it up! :)
| thetickincgclock 8/21/11 . chapter 6
I like the way you had him come back in this draft much better. more realistic i think to have quinn kicking and punching him. I actaully started laughing. very well written.
and the part with the glass cracking made me smile. Oh if only Q knew what was really going on...:)