This is perfect. I've always been a sucker for this type of story and I'm already loving it. Everything from your characters to the humor woven into the story is exactly what I was looking for and forward to. :)

I especially loved Jimmy and Drew's first meeting in this chapter, which I suppose was just the point.

One thing: When they're talking about the family who used to live in the Mitchell house, you call them "the Shrestha's". Should there be an apostrophe there, since they're talkig about the family and not what the family owned? (Then again, everybody seems to have a different rule about apostrophes in names, so maybe I'm wrong.)

Anyway, thanks for writing, and I really hope you continue. It looks like a really fun read.

:) Ashe

Aww! This is one of the cutest and funnest stories I've ever read, like the kind I can read to my much younger cousins and we'll all be satisfied!

I mean seriously. why isn't anybody reviewing for this story. I really see how this will blossom into something big. Why can't you people just give this story a chance. UPDATE SOON!

I love your story and how much you update. Are you going to update daily. I hope you do cuz i'm loving this.