|Reviews for Sea to Sky|
| Bloodytears22 2/1/13 . chapter 1
Amazing story! Is it sad that I started sobbing at the end?... But truely you write amazingly.
| darkluminance 11/27/11 . chapter 1
Very good! I enjoyed the read very much. Very unique. Thanks!
| 28mymusic 9/8/11 . chapter 1
wow, i really liked it. it was kinda sad but in a beautiful way.
but i dont get the end. did caspien kill him? and how do u steal a mermaids voice?
| ArcticEnderFox 8/17/11 . chapter 1
Okay, I think you are my most favorite author. Even if you write slash and stuff I don't usually like to read, you're writing is completely mesmersizing and spellbinding. It's beautiful, and you are truly talented.
This piece is breathtaking. Sorry, I might sound cheezy, but it's true. I love your style of writing alot. I wish I can learn from you but I honestly don't have the patience to be so descriptive.
The only things I would point out are places where you wrote along instead of alone.
["Being here along, I mean. You said you were trapped, didn't you? And you can't even sing. Don't you wish to go back?" Jason asks, tracing absently at a scar down the middle of the merman's torso, ending just after his tail begins.]
[To sea. So that I won't be lonely anymore. I don't want to be along anymore, he responds, pressing his chest to Jason's side and grabbing his wrist, tugging him towards the edge of the rock.]
And um...yeah...I'll be waiting for more