This is sooooooo gooooooooooood like I can't even take it :) okay so just saying this is awesome

Reading this story makes me think.

Thank you for sharing.

lol. the 'i'm off the see the wizard' is partly what i do..i'm more of an Anna though :) i'm never center of attention, but i've got a crush on my enemy...does that make me the main girl? (havent caught her name yet, sorry) enough about me and my confusing life..mm, i'm loving this story

but dont worry, McDonald's...i love you more

sorry..ciao, heading on to the next chappy

Apollo

this is sooooo good. you should totally post more asap. goood job i love it

ahaha he brought the condoms to school. pissed myself laughing

update soon

ahaha such amazing dreams they are

i pissed myself with laughter with the dream

i love it

update soon

This is written quite well and is quite creative. It is interesting so yes, I would like to read more.

Critique; Backpack you have back.