Arg well I'm glad Im not that attached to video games that must have cut his heart out and served it on a silver platter so he could eat it himself.

Wow. The story was pretty dramatic and detailed. I liked it. The sentences flowed smoothly, and the whole thing was pretty... I don't know. Maybe professional is the right word. It was just good. I really liked the difference between what people perceived as well. What Greg thought versus those two girls, and how what they said impacted him.

Anyways, I liked it! Keep writing.

Short but Sweet. I can see they're giving you fun assignments in Tennessee.

Also fix the name of the final game he played. You need to capitalize Among.

D Now hurry up with Capt. Pancake pwease.