it was okay. what was the point of the story? there was a good moral or lesson.

Well-done and well-written. I love stories like this. Thanks for brightening my day.

-Dhani

P.S. Would you mind reviewing my story?

This was fun to read. An enjoyable piece.

Regards.

OH! its you! once again your quirky titles have brought me to your account; I read the story then thought 'this sounds a bit like that pickle story I read' then i read your account and saw the pickle story!

this is cute...this is like a cynical version of aesop's fables. XD