| Reviews for Praying The Chromosomes Like Rosary Beads |
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BangxDitto 8/27/12 . chapter 1Is this a positive poem I sense? x) But what good is positivity if you can't throw in a little sarcasm? Beautiful as always-my favorite line is the title line. |
RandomUser674 8/26/11 . chapter 1This is beautiful! So many wonderful phrases. You've really got a gift! |
Insanity Streak 8/25/11 . chapter 1I really admire the way you combined science and religion into a poem to create harmony between two clashing forces. I have to admit that I did have to look a few of the words up, yet that doesn't stop this poem from being beautiful. I also want to say the concept of this piece was fabulous and the way you described it, particularly in the last stanza, was just as fantastic too. "But now I no longer feel like praying the chromosomes like rosary beads,instead I acknowledge that each gene should be loved unvaryingly" - That has to be the best part of the poem, in my opinion. Bravo. |
AuthorNinjaEarth 8/20/11 . chapter 1Hmm...interesting, Anna, interesting. To embrace who you are is important. Excellent work! |
nickyO 8/20/11 . chapter 1There's something about acknowledging the past and then letting go in this poem that I like a great deal. Am I right in thinking that there is also something about letting go of someone else's past that keeps trying to control your now? Keep writing Anna your a fav of mine with your novel and enlightening comparisons. |
Punslinger 8/19/11 . chapter 1If I understand this correctly, it is the most astonishing and beautiful exposure of the apprehension of conception that I've ever encountered. Even if I'm wrong, it is still astonishingly beautiful. |