love the imagery. "together they're like/ autumn & kill the/ leaves every/ spring." beautiful, simply beautiful.

There is something really fabulous about this, but I just can't put my finger on what it is.

Well done.

this was an interesting concept. i love his descriptions because they flowed so well. i think autumn should have its own line but thats just my opinion, i just think that line has so much power that the "& kill the" discredits. really nice work.

i like the way you paint pictures with your words

the imagery here is very warm even though the actual words aren't, i think? anyway it's really nice.