Love it. If it is indeed about writer's block, as one of the reviewers suggested, it definitely works, and I love the end. Not giving in and continuing in spite of him. Great. Keep writing! :)

Wow, this is hauntingly beautiful. "this hallow image of a man,

a shade,he loomed over my past like a shadow" - Oh yes, I know how this feels. Amazing poem overall! Keep writing!

Anna _

Very well done. If the title refers to writer's block, I'm sure we all can identify with that. It also describes my periods of depression which put my mind in a fog that makes everything seem unreal. At least it makes me appreciate normalcy all the more when it's over.