| Reviews for Pride |
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AlysonSerenaStone 8/23/11 . chapter 1so sad and beautiful |
LadyLuly 8/23/11 . chapter 1Aw, very nice! The writing style was beautiful, and I liked how you mentioned that the marble had been polished by tears. It was sort of unexpected and very powerful. The single tear was a bit cliched, but whatever. You managed to convey your narrator's complicated backstory and emotions in a very short amount of words. Bravo! |