wow. That was some ending...

Should I be studing right now? Yep. Am I to overwhelmed by this story to work on a spimple reading assigment? Indeedy.

Oh nooo! Sad ending. I think it leaves you hanging too much. There's a certain amount you can just leave it at, but this was too much. This almost seems like you didn't know what to do after this point so you just left it.

It had a good plot, though, and your language was pretty good, although I think it could be better.

Good job.

Silver Sparke

Stupid thing won't let me log in...

But I'll totally write a...story thingy off of this. If that's fine with you. ;)

Interesting twist - I'm not sure how Will would take this. Or Liz, for that matter.

Do me a favor, and write a couple more chapters, help me out. ;)

The characters are great. I don't know if I've mentioned that, but, they are!

Aw, cute.